Showing posts with label Book installment. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Book installment. Show all posts

Saturday, September 12, 2015

A Designing Woman 4 for #wewriwar

More from the Steampunk book



Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors.  This is a sample from my latest work in progress, "A Designing Woman", and I hope you enjoy it.  This is the start of the next chapter and introduces more of the family. Continuing from last week, Amanda's father and brother quiz her about the mysterious Mr. Williams.
(last weeks snippet).



 She laughed, “Don't get too far ahead in your hopes. He's studying for the ministry, and I somehow cannot see myself as a minister's wife. Could you imagine me doing everything Mrs. Peabody does?”

Privately, Lord Caterham had to admit that he couldn't see that either, but this was such a step in the right direction for his daughter that he wasn't about to throw the least bit of obstacle in its path. So he changed the subject, “Did Mr. Williams mention which college he was a member of?”

New College, Freddie's; doesn't remember Freddy, though.”

Who doesn't remember me?” Frederick found his way to the parlor, having dealt with the horses, or at least ensured that the stable hands were at their work.

Amanda regarded her brother with a mixture of affection and envy. Affection, because he was a likeable if somewhat flighty, young man, and envy, because he could attend university while she could not.


This is a work in progress. Here are links on tablo and authonomy.  Apparently Steampunk implies Victorian, Dieselpunk the 1920's. What-punk should a Regency period book be? Horse-punk isn't right.

Despite being told in no uncertain terms that "steampunk" meant Victorian with ubiquitous steam technology, I'm calling this steampunk, although given the amount of time they will later spend on the river, maybe "Steampunt" is better. Amanda is working on what will become the defining technology of the 19th century, steam. Although, a few things, like the Napoleonic war will get in the way.

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

A Teaser

This is from my WIP Steorrum (c) 2015 Amelia Grace Treader.
Cynric had previously gone to the stars as payment for curing his beloved from TB. He's come back home at the wrong time.

At the White Hart.

Dr. Bridget Heartney blearily scanned the menu at the White Hart. She said to her best friend Madge, “It's been twenty days quarantine. I did my twenty-three days in-country and when I came back, another twenty-three. Damn idiots.”
Madge, a new-age believer, nervously fingered the quartz crystal she wore from a silver chain around her neck and said, “Can't blame them. There's not much hope if you have that virus.”
“That's not true. Not if you aren't half starved before you catch it.”
“Still, they're scared. Afraid they might catch it from you.”
“That's truly daft. I mean it. You have to have body fluid contact. Not like that's going to happen here in Wroughton. Bloody stockbrockers.”
“You never know. Your aura says something's afoot. A big change in your life.”
Bridget ignored her friends superstitious worries and said, “Damn, I missed this bitter in Liberia. Even if it is just Courage.”
“You shouldn't drink that much, Bridge. Not good for you and,” she paused, “Your aura is showing red.”
“Stop it. What aura?” Bridget rather uncertainly, because two pints on an empty stomach is one too many for her, stood. She walked, almost stumbled, to the bar and placed her order. “Another pint of bitter, and a.”
“What, Dr. Bridget?”
She looked up at the barman. He seemed half her age, and she'd given him his school physical when she was newly qualified. “What's good?”
“It's all rubbish.”
“Then the bangers. Bangers, beans and chips. Tha's what lipitor is for, and I missed them.”
The man smiled at her. In exactly the way he'd smile at his mother. “Ta love. You're over at table four, with that crazy woman.”
“Madge isn't crazy. A bit odd, but not crazy.”
“If you say so. On the tab?”
“Why not? Thanks.” Then she walked back to the table with her friend. Miraculously, or perhaps from years of practice, she didn't spill her pint.
Bridget was halfway through her pint, and listening with barely concealed credulity to Madge telling her about the corn dolly's she'd left in Wayland's smithy and the Long barrow at Avebury when it happened.
“Come on Madge, you don't really believe that tripe, do you?”
“Tripe? I'll have you know this is the old religion, the way of the druids. It's you new believers that cause trouble. There were lights last night; didn't you see them? It is the coming of the new age for the old gods.”
“New believers? I don't believe in much of anything. We're just meat. When we die that's it.”
Madge looked at her friend and said in sorrow, “No, Bridge, there's more than that. You know it.”
“Maybe. Can't tell. Where's that damned banger and beans? Missed that in-country, more than you can possibly know.”
She was about to stand up and demand her food when the man came in. Tall, brown-haired, dressed in coarse linen and followed by a bobby, he looked completely lost.
Is there something to eat? And some ale, mead?
Bridget looked up, “Sound's Swedish or Danish. Most of them know English.” She stood up and walked to him. “Ale?”
He nodded, “Ale and food.
Bridget nodded to the barman, “Get him a pint, and double that order of bangers. Where's mine, or do you have to kill the pigs first?”
“It's coming Dr. Heartney.”
“Good.” She turned to the bobby who was shadowing the man. “He's just a lost foreigner. Swedish or something like that. I'll look after him.” She looked at the man, “Probably an extra from some remake of Robin Hood, or a similar piece of dreck.”
“You sure?”
“Yes, lot's of Swedes in the MSF. Got on well with most of them.”
“Did they carry swords?”
No, didn't need them. Good enough with their fists when it came to it. I'll keep him out of trouble.Then she turned to the man and said, “This way.”
He seemed to understand and replied, “Fair maid, thank you for your kindness.
“Whatever. Don't forget your pint.”
The man picked up the pint and drained it. “Another.
“Thirsty much? Get him another, but I'll carry it. And hurry up with that food.”
Yes, Dr. Bridget.”
Bridget thought, “I should never have encouraged them to use my first name,” but she took the pint and led the man to her table.
“This is my good friend Madge. What's your name?”
The man almost understood, so she tried again, slowly. “What, is, your, name?”
I'm called Cynric son of Cedric.
“Cynric Cedricson. I'm Bridget Heartney, well Dr. Heartney, but you can call me.”
Bridget? Is it really you?He grabbed her arm. Bridget could not help noticing the strength of his grip and the muscles in his arms.

Saturday, August 29, 2015

A designing woman #2 for #WeWriWa

More from the Pre-steampunk book



Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors.  This is a sample from my latest work in progress, "A Designing Woman", and I hope you enjoy it. Mr. Williams has come for a visit, the day after the assembly, and is now walking with Amanda on their way to the riverbank. They'd have seen her workshop, but for wearing their good clothes. He's just asked her about the papers he read (in last weeks snippet).



“What papers?”
“The ones in the library; I must say, you have a fine hand.”
“I hope you didn't mix them up, they were in order.”
“No, I could see that.” Then Mr. Williams gently chided her, “May I add, that 'Principles of Mechanics' is an unusual read for a young lady. I'd have thought 'the Mysteries of Udolpho' or some such romance would be to your liking.”
Amanda stopped short. She was about to reply sharply, and then noticed the smile on his face, “You're teasing me, aren't you?”
“Yes.”
“I never saw the point in those books, all heartthrob and passion in some made up land; I want to do real things.”


This is a work in progress. Here are links on tablo and authonomy.  Apparently Steampunk implies Victorian, Dieselpunk the 1920's. What-punk should a Regency period book be? Horse-punk isn't right.
Google's being dashed odd - the only way I can reply to comments is to edit the post. Oh well, there's always wordpress. Turns out, Google and Firefox don't get along on windows, but they do on my trusty Linux box.

I'm calling this proto-steampunk simply because I was told in no uncertain terms that "steampunk" meant Victorian with ubiquitous steam technology. Amanda's working before that and during the Regency, so it cannot be steampunk.

Saturday, July 25, 2015

After the convergence #4 8-10 sentences for #WeWriWa

More about Sarah



Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors.  This is a sample from my latest work, and I hope you enjoy it. It continues after Alan has been interviewed by the machine. This selection is part of where Sarah Gonzales is introduced. She's important, mostly by her absence in the first part of the book - she disappears - but takes a much more active role later. She's just gone through "the selection", a rather brutal sorting out of who is smart enough to go to "the academy" and work with or on "The Machine." It's done in school, in front of everyone. However, after that there seems to be a problem. While it's not really emphasized, this is a critical clue to what's happening in the story.






The machine beside him spoke, “Mr. Anderson, please, I don’t make that kind of mistake.”
They proceeded to discuss her as if she weren’t there.
“She doesn’t seem to have the depth we require; she is decent in logic and is highly imaginative, but.”
“Have you checked the date and signature?”
Sarah drifted off into her own world.
Lord Pershore pulled his sword and stealthily approached the highwaymen. They bound Lady Sarah Jane Gonzales and were carrying her off to their lair, a run-down public house near the Bath road.
“Ms. Gonzales, pay attention, please,” it was that man again. She stood and said, “Well if I’ve failed, I’ve failed; I’ll just go now.”
“No you haven’t; it looks like someone from the resistance has been at work; you don’t know anyone in the mutual impedance society?”


This work was recently published and is available for Kindle, including Kindle unlimited. It is a dark, noir detective story set in the near future, after machines have become intelligent. It uses a number of engineering/science puns - the "mutual impedance society." 
Available here.